This is what we call a bad composition. Nice timing but distracting; kind of ugly. Your photo could be so much better. Try improving your composition and lighting! It's only a 4.8/10.Pleasant lighting; great. Aesthetically nothing wrong here, but something is missing. This gets a 6.4/10.Static composition, my eyes don't really know where to look. Also, you need to invest in some studio lighting… Keep trying. You still have work to do on your composition, lighting, and framing. This is at most 4.6/10.Good place for your subject, and strong idea, interesting subject. Yet this pic is just…ok. Don't forget about the background. This gets a 6.7/10. Great, you're clearly an Amateur photographer! Let's see if I can help you improve your technique.